Until I saw the land

Until I saw the land.

I do not remember how.

I am end in the small boat 

In the middle of the sea.


I hear the sound brids,

waters, and wake up.

Is so chilly, 

All I can think 

Of die.


Question myself.

Am I will be going to die here?

What happen to me?

Why I was the only person?


Start to refresh about 

Last night 

All I remember that 


I went to vocation. 

Drinking with friends.

After that than I am end here. 


All I can do 

Pray to God 

Come save 

Me from this sea. 


When the sun really 

High in the sky.

Is so hot. 


I went to sleep.

Four hour later.

I saw the land. 



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