under the rain of pain

feeling pain,

outside it begans to rain,

listening to the sound of maybe a crane,

i think maybe right now i am going insane

 

the noise and sound,

listening to the rain pound,

looking down,

gently shaking and feeling like i am going to drown

 

 

 

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