Trying To Take My Last Breath

                                                        It was late at night
I had given up,I had lost my might
On the verge of death
Trying to take my last breath
I found a picture of you
I swear this is true
I remembered how much I loved you
So I forced myself up 
And I cried
Because I had fucking lied
Too much
Shit...this is too much
Im just a kid
Oh dear god I repeat Im just a kid
Please let me live
I can no longer stand
Without your gentle hand
I no longer have a plan.




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