Touching death

The gentle brush of lips
The sensation of the trigger
The cock of the gun
The sweat from his skin
Be careful oops too late you're dead
The claminess of your skin
The brush of his lips
The tingle of death
As his tears softly hit your skin
The gentle pillow of night stifles his cries
This is the touch of death

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