Torn Inside

Location

89131
United States
36° 21' 56.304" N, 115° 13' 28.146" W

Her eyes burning,
Her nose running,
Her heart slowing,
as the tears drip down her flushed pale face,
the voices remind her of destruction deep inside,
They steal her dreams leaving night terrors behind,
Night after night, it began to crush her.
No hands reached out, nothing but empty hope to grab on to,
The voices rang her ears again and again repeating: hopeless.
A strong will buried deep in her heart began to grow,
it held all the pain she carried,
the pain that needed to be carried once more, but away,
She took one look back.
She took that jump off.
She took a chance that changed it all forever.

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savigirl14

This is a really good poem. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.

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