Tomorrow Will Be Better


United States
33° 43' 28.6788" N, 117° 54' 26.3664" W

It feels like I'm standing
on the edge of a cliff
next to a calm sea
and at any moment
I could slip into the blue abyss
quietly, the water would burden my lungs
and with my last breath,
I could whisper
"Tomorrow will be better"


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