Timelessness

Wed, 06/18/2014 - 18:34 -- Keace

I can hear time fly by, I can see it disappear

I can taste the world’s tears, I can smell its fears

The angry oceans, the forgiving shores

The turning mountains, the closing doors

 

Oh, this forest keeps no secret from me

I know its every move, its every story

And I know that you’re not falling, you’re not falling

 

I feel the sun burning a hole in the sky

I touch the moon with my finger

I cry at night for the hurt and hungry

I pray each day for those without shelter

 

And you keep on going on

And you keep on holding on

To what keeps you going on

When nothing else goes

Comments

June_Helen

Completely beautiful <3 , no words...  jk I always have words, but this is perfection, absolutely on point perfect! I want to cry, this is my thoughts written by someone else.

Keace

I love you. :)

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