Timeless

 Love me, love me like no other, love me like this is the last chance we have to make this right, my heart is on a timer, every second closer and closer ticking to zero, every second we're on a tight rope while the crowd applauds, ready to watch us, hoping that we make it across but deep down wishing we fell helplessly. But we can do anything, lets take this leap of faith I promise I'll catch you, if you land short I'll pick you right up, I'll hold you tight, forever isn't a very long time before you know it well be on a beach remembering all the fun we had when we were younger, remembering all the mischief we got into, the new worlds that we conquered. The new cultures we discovered...

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Our world

Comments

Kamille7

Your poem on the topic of love is good and this post you try to show that when someone love then what he feel and at what level he can go for love. But i don't know why you use Timeless as a title of this poem. A few number of people also exist on the world that they know the value of real love. any how, I originally want to find cheap essay writing service online but when i wrote this post like to read your point of view regarding Love.

Jack Pen

A lot of people rush into relationships and have the misconception that sexual attractions are what love is. Another issue is that people tend to believe you can only love once, and think that when you fall in love you can't ever fall in love with anyone else, and I'd like to believe we can love many, as long as our heart is big enough.  And of course the old saying, time heals all.

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