TEN MILES OF BAD ROAD

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Loving you is like walking ten miles of bad road on a hot summers day..........Sometimes I want to give up and stop walking but I go on anyway.......What kind of fool goes on walking the same old  rocky road day after day ........When each step he make he always fills his footing slipping away.....The pot holes I encounter are like the fights we use to have were I would always give in........But theses day there's no more substances to fill them in.........The longer I walk the more I thirst ......But wanting for a drink that's never going to arrive only makes it worse........Or like those small irritating pebbles that get stuck in your shoe......No matter how hard I try to solve the problem the pain just keeps coming thru...That's why loving you is like walking ten miles of bad road .......But for now I'll keep doing it until it gets old.....

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