Temper With Mine

The sliver of your soul
That I knew so wholly
Was forged below,
But ever so softly.
And fairly maid,
I cannot help but steal your love,
Or for your life, 
Meddle with your heartstone.
 

 

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Comments

Mega

10 years ago

does this have something to do with aragorn and that elfchick?  And did you mean to spell made as "maid"?  Anywho a good read, very middleearthybes.  liked it

 

forthemayqueen

10 years ago

It does actually. And yes I meant to spell it that way. 

Thank you very kindly.

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