Sundown

Gray tinted skin

With splotchy pink cheeks

Ashy peppered hair,

Sprinkled under soft stars

Cracked tired lips,

Blue from the frost

Wisped breath

Flowing, churning,

Only to rise like musty smoke

 

Worn leather jacket,

Casting a calloused longing warmth

Stained, muddy boots

Scrubbed for their faults and memories,

But they never cease to arise

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741