Sublime

Once upon a time

I was listening to sublime, 

right on the beach so peaceful and calm, 

the waves clashing into the soft sand,

while listening to my favorite band, 

with the brisk, cool, salty, water brushes up against my feet, 

I say to myself, "my life is now complete".

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741