The Sub-Mariner

Namor the Sub-Mariner is hearing about the great white sharks attacking the surface-dwellers, which is bad;

When he finds out that some of the victims of the shark attacks are children, the Sub-Mariner gets really mad.

 

When the Sub-Mariner also hears about the shark attacks occurring at a beach, he immediately swims to that beach;

A lesson to the great white sharks is what the Sub-Mariner will teach.

 

The Sub-Mariner uses his telepathy to control the great white sharks and I'm speaking honestly;

With his telepathy, the Sub-Mariner stops the great white sharks from attacking the surface-dwellers, as you can see.

 

The Sub-Mariner tells the great white sharks to stay far away from the surface-dwellers, which is awesome as can be;

With the Sub-Mariner controlling the great white sharks, there will never be anymore shark attacks and I'm sure you'll agree.

 

The Sub-Mariner continues to control the great white sharks everyday;

It's now safe for the surface-dwellers to swim at the beach and that's all I have to say.

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