Hold me close

Don't let me go

I'm falling for you but I doubt you know 

Tell me I'm not crazy to give you so much and expect so little.

What are we doing?

Is this love or is it lust?

With your lips pressed against my neck I could swear you just wanna feel loved.

I thinking I'm giving up.

I'm falling in love.

Catch me, please.

Stay to hear my heart beat.

Watch my eyes and never lose my gaze. 

Don't let me go.

Hold me close,please, don't  walk away this time.



very tricky poem. the rhyme scheme at the beginning was a nice start and then it just choppy after that. the content was great, but your delivery needs a little bit of work. The ending was a little abrupt, but i liked it.

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