Spiritual Perfection

Thu, 10/24/2013 - 00:53 -- emc2014

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Just a glance from the ice crystals god blessed you with even if god punishes you with death, cycles and pain. To be ruled over by man, That glance has the potential to make god himself smile and forgive eve for eating from the tree of knowledge and to put you where you deserve to be in the garden of Eden were your beauty shines with no shame of your nakedness as for the animals the birds and the serpent itself gives love as you live on what was heaven on earth with everlasting true love god gifts your glance with immortality.

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