The Soul

Nobody can lose,

Find or please the soul,

Hide or torture it

Or trade the soul

With anything

That is different

Or like it.

It is not a commodity

But the emptiness

That resides in

The innermost cavity

Of the living heart

Or as some say,

The innermost core

Of the sedate mind

Or the concealed nature

Of an understanding mind

Felt as one

Throughout the body

Everywhere

As the cause of

Yours and mine.

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

Smokexx

I like it that way...it' not a challenge or a card game.

Ravinder Kumar Soni

Is this a kind of literary comment? Does it point to my failing?

Smokexx

Uyyy..sorry again. I'm a high school student, in my parish I read poems, and that's why I like the soul... don't misunderstand me, I'm a young boy of 15 years old without many experiences of heart.

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