Something Special

Fri, 09/28/2012 - 23:13 -- Rid3r

Location

08401
United States
39° 22' 6.672" N, 74° 26' 27.0204" W

Sometimes i feel lost, broken, and fragile. someone that you truly want but can't have.
Someone that you want to be there for but can't. Who do you blame when you ask her and its too late.
The only person you can blame is yourself.

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jwiener

This is a small poem, but it is filled with so much raw emotion. Everyone feels this way sometimes, and we have to remember that we are in charge of our own lives, which is why the last sentence of this poem is so important. If you are interested in writing small poems which pack a powerful punch, check out "tips for writing a haikus" under the "poetry writing tips" under the "resources" section!

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