Shooting Star

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We wish upon a shooting star, just to change who we are

 

Gaze among the stars so bright, just so we can see the light

 

Those in the heavens above, don’t know of the troubles below

 

How even when we see fresh fallen snow, we wish that our flaws would go

 

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