River Wash

When I’m down

And feel like sinking into the ground

I write

 

The words ebb and flow

With my worries

With my dreams

 

Their inconsistency gives me room to breathe

All my thoughts drain away

When I put a pen to paper

 

Ink will drain down

And the pen will have died

But now I feel light

Comments

TamingOfSeaWolves

this is amazing. never stop writing this is emotion.

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