Rising Sun

I can't sleep but thats ok
Yesterday's become today,
Thinking about all I've had
Insomnia is not so bad
But each new dawn's a passing day
And passion has avoided me,
Still can't sleep,
reasons unknown
The bags beneath my eyes have shown,
Yesterday's become today,
Im not sure if Im ok
Living off of time I've borrowed
Not sure if I'll see tomorrow

This poem is about: 
Me

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sleepwalkingpoet

Hi I'm new. Just babbling on about stuff. Kinda would like to improve so constructive criticism is welcomed, but keep it nice.

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