At Rest

Fri, 05/03/2013 - 15:58 -- mvasq96


United States
37° 5' 24.864" N, 95° 42' 46.4076" W

Like an object at rest I remained
Although a force was acting upon me
There was no reaction of mine
To the change that had happened
What a strange phenomenum of science I was
I didn't react when I should have
I stayed at rest, remained at rest
I never fought, I never clawed
The stimuli failed to stimulate me
I never protested, it brought me wrong!
Until the day I took too long
I had had enough,
My elements became more unstable, more reactive
They had lost too many electrons without losing all
I was part of group one now,
And never would go back to my Noble state
I fought, I clawed, I protested now
I gave in to the slightest provocation
I'd never again remain at rest


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