His eyes grew black with skin so dark

He ran in the rain, screaming at his dog 

But little did he notice an old woman standing by 

He looked at her for a second, she began to cry 

The old woman disappeared with eyes as black as his

Shaking his head he continued on running 

He didn't notice that the dog disappeared as well 

He kept calling out for him, he saw the old woman again

She smiled and started to bleed out her eyes

His eyes grew watery and noticed just red

And then everything turned 








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