Relationships (A collab ft. Sal Fratto)

 

I'll walk if I have to ... just to get a glimpse of you, even an old withered Polaroid picture, containing a  reflection of your divine features in a foggy mirror is true clarity & beauty to me It's alright Pretty flowers in your hair Lights dimmed in your grandmothers living room on what seems to be Thanksgiving Once my hand lays a figure on your perky cheekbones, I'll whisper to myself, hoping that you'll hear me Say I miss you And I'll be inside of your heart u ntil the moment you fall asleep, and come alive as you also travel  Folded in To the inside of your body   You aren't the one  How ordinary , how, dull how cliche.. No, you are not the one  You are everything and anything  Limitless Running laps around infinity The sky's not your limit  The only limit is you  You aren't my counter part You're my other part  YOU COMPLETE ME YOU MAKE ME WHOLE Without you,  I'm just a fragmentation of the person I want to be, The person I can be  Without you, I'm hopeless I'm empty  I'm unfinished   Start again Rush from the wave Oceans flow into your hair I love you Sweet dreams honey Empty  Missing the crevice of your hand Outline Future Goodnight   Goodmorning How are you?  How am I?  Life seems to keep passing me by Oh I've lost track of the time   You ever feel trapped inside A prisoner to your own damn mind I'm on the fucking edge  You save my life again and again To Sink or to swim? You're the only thing that makes me want to fight to live  The only one that truly listens  Maybe we should start from the beginning  Because I don't want these times to end    Roll with me Down an evanescent  Flourescent Stream of unconscious Close your eyes We drift away. Silence

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

Fitzy Marlote

Love does that to one's mind. An endless confusion of feelings/thoughts flowing rapidly by. Normally; I hate the lack of structure, grammar skills and intelligent word usage but, it totally works. Why? Because that was the state of your mind when the poem was concieved. Well done!

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