Real Success

Location

Zimbabwe

If reasoning is as the air we breathe –

Universal;

When there are no hiccups in the lanes of thought

From the past, to now to the future,

And such reasoning so perfect-

Then I, as a being know what I want

And am constantly striving towards that;

And every rationality, every action I have taken

Is the best one, the one that I will cherish?

I will value, without regret-

When it occurs like always what I have wanted it to be

When the right choice is made

When what I believe is best for me-

Is the best:

Even if to be hated is better than to be loved

But when in the end what I think

What I do is what I want

And makes me who I am-

Then I have succeeded.

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