Promise Me?

Fri, 09/11/2015 - 11:34 -- Neptune

Will you promise me something?

Please let this words sink,

In case I get so thin,

And can't give you a promise ring,

 

When everything meant to be broken,

I want you to let your heart open,

Find someone who will take it with gentleness,

Using his action,not his empty promises,

 

I'm not a perfect person,babe,

I might hurt your heart with a blade,

Or let it fall and leave a scrape,

Your heart's lovely, it may break,

 

I'll try to be the person you want me to be,

I'm not normal. I'll just treat you terribly,

So I'll just let you see,

A person who will willingly take your heart and will treat you like a Queen Bee

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