PRETTY BROWN EYES

Tue, 08/14/2012 - 23:58 -- dolvas

PRETTY BROWN EYES

PRETTY BROWN EYES WHAT HAVE YOU SEEN?
WERE YOU AWAKE OR WAS IT A DREAM?

THOSE VISIONS OF STRUGGLE, HOPELESSNESS, HEARTACHE AND PAIN
ARE PICTURES AND IMAGES THAT HAS CONSUME THE BRAIN
DISASTER, TRAGEDY, ADDICTION AND DEATH
THE SIGHT OF A LOVE ONE TAKE HER LAST BREATH

PRETTY BROWN EYES WHAT HAVE YOU SEEN?
WHERE YOU AWAKE OR WAS IT A DREAM?

THE VIEW OF SOMEONE WHO WAS LOST NOW TO BE FOUND
WATCHING SOMEONE BREAK FREE WHO ONCE WAS BOUND
A STARE AT THE SKY IN SEARCH FOR ANSWERS AND PURPOSE
TO SEE THE SUN LIGHT BRING HOPE TO THE SURFACE

PRETTY BROWN EYES WHAT HAVE YOU SEEN?
WHERE YOU AWAKE OR WAS IT A DREAM?

SWEET FUTURE IS WHAT PRETTY BROWN EYES WANT TO SEEK
A NEW BEGINNING, A NEW LIFE, A NEW FRIEND TO MEET
OBSERVE, LOOK, PRETTY BROWN EYES AND SEE
EVERY DETAIL IN LIFE OPEN WIDE TAKE A PEAK
SO MUCH TO LEARN SO MUCH TO OBSERVE FROM THE SEEN AND UNSEEN

PRETTY BROWN EYES ARE YOU AWAKE?
OR IS IT JUST A DREAM?

Dolvas

Comments

jwiener

The repetition throughout this poem definitely helps to emphasize your feelings as you write this poem, of trying to determine dreams and reality.

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