"Patience" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 13/6/2005

Location

United Kingdom

When PRESSURE Comes Knocking How PATIENT Are You... ?
Do You Remain COOL Or Are You The Type To Start HURLING ABUSE... !?!
I Try To STAY COOL When Dealing With Fools... !!!
Cos' These Days IMPATIENCE Can Leave Your Bed VACANT... !!!
It's Simply That BLATANT Violence Is... FLAGRANT... !!!
While Patience Is SOBBING...
Are You IN A RUSH To Have Tears On Your Coffin... ???
My Patience Is SHORTER Than EVER Before... !!!!!
But I’m Looking For PEACE Instead of Street Wars...

ANGER Now SOARS Through MOST Peoples Pores... !!!
TOO MANY Now THINK That They're REALLY HARDCORE... !?!
Now This ISN'T NEW I've Said This BEFORE... !!!
Your Blood Will Just POUR Cos' BADMAN DON'T Give You A Chance For BIG TALK... !!!!!
So DON'T Talk The Talk UNLESS You WALK THE WALK... !!!
ACTING The BADMAN Can Cut Your Life Short... !!!
And Then Come The SIRENS... !!!
So... Patience or Violence Take A Moment And THINK..............
I'll Give You A Moment To... SIP On That Drink.............................. ..
Before You End Up In A Church FILLED With... " Silence "...................
But Patience Is Needed In Much of Our Lives... !!!!
From Dealing With Colleagues To Dealing With Wives...
Women Or Children And YES... STUPID Men...
Can Make You LOSE Patience When Dealing With Them... !!!
I Try To Stay CALM.... BEFORE CLOSING My Palm... !!!
Cos' Fists Are A Weapon That Can Bring You HARM... !!!
I'm Simply Suggesting To VALUE God's Blessing...
Use What You're GIVEN Your Body's For... LIVING... !!!!!
A BRAIN And A HEAD Try THINKING... NOT KILLING... !!!
ABUSE of THIS Tool Will Leave Your Brain DEAD... !!!
DON’T Walk With The Blind KEEP USING Your Mind... !!!!!!!
And Maybe One Day It's PEACE That You'll Find...
That's What I’m Looking For During My Life... !!!!!
It's Something I'd DIE For A World WITHOUT War...
A World FILLED With PATIENCE Right To The Earth's Core... !!!
Do You See What I’m Saying Or Do I Need To Say MORE... ?!?
THIS Is A Subject With Pictures To Draw...
Pictures of LOVE... From Sons To Their Mothers...
Pictures of LOVE... From Brother To Brother...
PATIENCE From ALL... REGARDLESS of Colour... !!!
I'm Trying To Touch Ya With POSITIVE Vibes...
Cos' Right Now I'm Seeing TOO MANY Folks CRY... !!!
From Friends I Grew Up With To People Who Thought That BEAUTY Was Life...
LIFE IS A BEAUTIFUL Thing... I AGREE...
But Every Body Is NOT FILLED With Beauty... !!!!
Just Look At Most MP's And Then You WILL SEE...
Their TOLERANCE Level Is Somewhat... AT SEA................................ ...
When They Are SO QUICK To Judge Those In Streets...
People Like YOU And... People Like ME...
PATIENCE Is Something That Presidents NEED... !!!
Just Look At The Bush's... George And His Daddy... !!!!
Patience Is Something They BOTH Seemed To NEED... !!!
And Then The U.S. ... Might NOT Be SO STRESSED... !!!
Patience And STRESS Are CLOSELY Related... !!!
STRESS Is A Problem That Can Be ABATED... !!!
It's Simply A Matter of Being MORE GRACIOUS When IGNORANCE Bates Us... !!!
And This Can Be Dealt With By... SHOWING MORE...

............................ " PATIENCE " .................................

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world
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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed. Never stop sharing your heart. 

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