Our Water World

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34761
United States
28° 34' 58.998" N, 81° 31' 36.2208" W
34761
United States
28° 34' 58.998" N, 81° 31' 36.2208" W

It's started and it's hot.

Go outside I will not.

I tell poeple I'm allergic to sun,

And yet I do want to have fun

Outside that is. Of course the summer is what I like

In spite of the hot sun it's just right.

We decide to got to Kings Island to

Walk around and do what others do.

we went on rides and were tired

And watched lots of rides as if we were hired.

we swam for hours and hours to come

Like we ruled the ruled the pools in our little kingdom

And off we went to ridethe waves

Over and under since we were to brave.

I befriended more swimmers along these waters.

We introduced ourselvrs and becames starters

Of the countdown for when the waves would arrive

And sweep us off our feet. We felt so alive

And swam for so long

That it was eventually time to end our song.

We packed our belongings and walked to the car

And headed straight home that was very far.

Alas my listeners, that's the end of my tale

When we all swam and will soon continue to prevail.

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