Only through the rain

As the clouds get bigger and darker
I feel my heart starting to beat faster
The thundering makes the whole world shake
I wish these walls would just break
Let the rain in; let it fall down on my cheek…
Every time I see a rain cloud I think of my life
Seeming to obsorbs everything around
All the negativity wants to make me burst
And once I burst I forgive for what has happened in the past
This is where the rain creates an awesome feeling in my life
The walls have shattered to the ground
And the rain begins to surround
Drops start falling, and with that my mask begins dissolving
The rain sets me free and my feelings begin to be released
As the rain stops I begin to feel relieved
For there is now I new ME

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Alicefyre

To fly in the rain, the smiles we all feign

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