One’s path, One’s fate, One’s Destiny

When one has all but wish for none

When one has none but wishes all

 

One’s path, One’s fate, One’s Destiny  

 

A life for a life, denial in humanity

A life denial at humanity for a life

 

One’s path, One’s fate, One’s Destiny  

 

To see without eyes, but thereof restrained

To see without restrained, thereof with eyes

 

One’s path, One’s fate, One’s Destiny  

 

The true color when whom befallen

The true whom befallen with color

 

 One’s path, One’s fate, One’s Destiny  

One’s path, One’s fate, One’s Destiny  

 

 

 

 

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montalvojonathan1

The true meaning behind my poem is that every decision (Path), leads our fate to become our destiny. I believe we control our fate and destiny but who controls us? That will be our decision, emotions that lead us to decide. It may seem I’m only mixing the words but from my point of view each sentence that looks the same actually has the opposite meaning in my point of view. I am not a great poem so what do i know just saying. Nevertheless thank you for reading my poem

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