Ode to grief

Location

Australia

Here I am
Broken, battered,
Grief stricken and bent over
Tears, tears
Oh the tears!
Flowing, pulsating
A river dammed yet bursting
Let go, let go my soul
Open the flood gates
Of pain borne too long
Of joy remembered
Bitter sweet
Hallelujah,
Hallelujah!

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