Oceanview

Throw away the smiles

Bring home the fear

Forget to calm the child

Rage the storm unclear

I stand on the shore

Alone, as a mess unfolds 

Water tickling my toes

Searching for more

The salty air only knows 

Leave me alone, untouched 

With tears still on my face

It is easier to find myself 

In all the ocean's space 

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

Comments

woodmel

I just got on this site and I looked for anything nature related. I love the ocean's space. Great visual:)

MrsLanieYoung

Thank you! It warms my heart knowing that you read my poem and were able to visualize through my words. Enjoy your day :) 

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