O Really?

Give me money

or give me jewels

but I won't be happy without you

 

My whole life depends on you

you are my life raft

without you I can't even beathe

 

So when will you see?

Your love makes my heart beat

You swim through my veins

and when you're not around I can't use my brain

 

So if i'm under a tree and when

I'll be there with you,

my sweet oxygen

  

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