Nothing Worse...

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 11:08 -- FindHer


United States
40° 53' 19.4604" N, 73° 50' 52.0332" W

This is when your jaw drops,
You've finally seen the agony of a man that serves another for scraps,
Builds a family from the ground up and still can't see the light,
Que tienen miedo de la soga y de morir
Pero de llegar aqui pueden proclamarcen muerto.
Dehumanize the servant and take away the dream,
Oh press, oppress them and give them the title of enemy.



You showed a great writing skill in the word play in the last line of the poem ("oh press" and "oppress"), and it helped to make the poem very powerful.


Poderoso! Gracias

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