NOT A POEM BUT JUST SAYING

Thu, 09/13/2012 - 22:44 -- Rid3r

Lets say you really care about someone but you cant have them.
that really hurts, doesn't it ?
well thats how i feel. i honestly really truly care about you.
your the reason i go to school everyday. honestly you make me happy,
everytime i see you, you make me smile. like i have butterflies in my stomach.
you actually make me feel better.
i don't know why, but i really dont know howto explain this love to you
when i really want you by my side
i don't wanna hide anymore, i just want you to know that i really fucking care bout you.

Comments

lacriosa

I really liked the meaning behind the poem. It's a feeling that everyone feels at least once in their life, and I think you got that across really well in the poem.

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