Naive Love

I know that I just met you,

but I also know that what I feel is true.

All of the traits I hate is what you have,

but funny how this heart told me it's love.

 

It's been only a month since we started talking,

but the days feel longer, I keep on falling.

The smile draws my face when we're dining.

I cannot help but be conscious while we're eating.

 

No matter what people will say about us,

I will hold on and fight until the very last.

I couldn't care less even our world is chaotic,

Why can't people be happy for us, hence barbaric?

 

 

I've never been so careless, I've never been so spontaneous.

Loving you is like fighting in a war,

no matter where you are, I'll be chasing you near or far.

This poem is about: 
Me

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