Mysterious Object

Sun, 11/04/2012 - 14:32 -- lgmena

Location

55105
United States
44° 55' 58.8288" N, 93° 9' 46.4616" W

Delicate yet stable, precious like a pair of diamonds. Hues that immediately capture the eye; colors that leaves one blind. How can something be so beautiful? Maybe there is no exact explanation for such a mystery. Petals so precious; colors so exotic. Leaving one breathless, with no nerve left in the body. A flower, that can make a woman fall in love in seconds. A flower that leaves its scent anywhere it goes. How can flower be so beautiful? It's a mystery that I never want to figure out. Let me fall in love with a mystery so predictable yet so complicated.

Comments

lgmena

This is one of my first actual poems that I feel confident about! Comments are welcomed!

ktlawles

Hey just wanted to tell you that I quite liked your poem. It was cool how it expressed a certain thought rather than a poetic form or rhyme, and the content was very explicit as to the way you feel towards the "object" and it's universal truths. So yeah thanks for writing it!

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