My own Person

I'm have many good traits, I'm "flawless" 

But people only watch for the bad traits regardless

Similar to a pacifist, I'd probably go outside and help someone after this

I'm benevolent, a GOD sent 

Down from Heaven to spread friendliness 

Things people can't miss 

I'm determined, good enough to give a sermon in different wise versions.

I represent my family the best through progress, never retrogress 

Every feeling I express is genuine everytime  I unwind a rhyme and stay golden, call me Pforzheim. 

Get this, like a rap veteran, I spit tremdous, don't you see the resemblence. 

This poem shows the defintion of cognition and my ambition to get money for my tuition and be the first edition to go to college and gain admission 

I will never fail, only time will tell.

Just straight dedication, spending more time on my rhymes than a person in incarceration

I have the will and the skill to hold my own hard and still

I say it loud and proud, in my own world I'm higher than a cloud

My own person, i.e. my own character

It should register that in my life I'm my own editor

I control my whole body soul and that's a parole 

That is a promise and I'm honest, I'm "flawless."

 

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PoetnotStoic

Please comment you people that read this. 

I have been practicing very much on my poetry and rhymes and want to know you people's opinion. 

PoetnotStoic

Please comment you people that read this. I have been practicing very much on my poetry and rhymes and want to know you people's opinion. 

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