My love

Sat, 06/06/2020 - 12:10 -- Patali

I see you when I close my eyes
I miss you when I opened my eyes
My heart beats calls your name
While my blood runs with your love

We were in love with each other
Until the devil day come
God to away you from me
But forgets to take me with you

You may having comfortable
In heaven with beautiful maidens
But iam here in this world
Suffering to death

I wish I am one of those maidens
To make comfortable
I wish iam one of your sparkles
That make you charming

This poem is about: 
Me

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