my hero

my living lord
my living God
my hero
my dad
one who fulfilled all my wishes
one who understands all my feelings
and one who cry when I get dwellings

he spends his golden time
even I do small crime
and his efforts made me to shine

he taught me good things
gave me freedom wings
and his heart never shrinks

his only desire
is our happiness
I will always support him
the ever glowing gem
my precious dad

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
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Comments

davehawk72

I just recently lost my dad a few weeks ago due to a stroke and lung cancer,

this poem got me thinking of him and the impact he had on my life. 

I'll always miss my dad, but I'll always love him as well.

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