In My Head

Location

20659
United States
38° 24' 56.7072" N, 76° 42' 38.0268" W
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Chaos,
Destruction
Is all going down
I feel like I'm in a ghost town.

Mind shattering
Seeing different faces.
My heart is torn
In so many places.

Distorted,
Decayed,
My mind is frayed
and I'm grasping at straws.

Standing on a ledge
Not sure I can take it.
If I can't,
well, I can always just fake it.

Comments

jwiener

12 years ago

I think this poems sums up how many people feel at at least one point in their lives- that they have to "fake it until they make it" essentially. Great story and imagery! Check out "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section for even more great ideas for writing poems!

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