M.V.P spitting bars (volume 5)-the conclusion

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10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

sabotaged beliefs reaches
at the age of 10
realizing your grave
has been custom made just for you
has been formed and ignored for the time being
that is because you haven't been full conceiving
the rhyming and reasoning behind the formality call life
spiced up countries because the U.S.
is hungry to swallow the whole blood
stolen goods and riches, centuries old is still on
hold take shapes of older molds
concoct ingredients stirred in the pot
by a greedy seamstress in which you devour
final products that are truly foreign objects
we don't bother ourselves to even dissect
or presented thoughts and ideas
controlled like puppetry forcefully
strings attached
to stay latched like lab rats
sex up in connecting to manhood
we really misunderstand
the primary watchings of hollywood
take it back to nice solid food, gradual steady upbringing
from naive thinking to incompetency
deleted from human features preached
incorrect teachings

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