Musical ABC

Location

032452
Romania

You release the innocent nature,
An overwhelming sound,
I transit in a digital world,
Listening to an infinitesimal vibration ,
The delicacy of the rhythm,
Owns states of my moods,
Strikes the alchemy of senses,
The desire to be reduced and feel the levity,
I can feel it with admirable clarity,
I'm hanging on the spiral of fantasy,
Touched by your musicality,
Your mastery takes me away ...
A symphony inside and outside of me,
Then I assist the transmigration of an emotion,
The feelings inside me they fall,
As the drops of a waterfall!
A silver concert which leads elsewhere,
The air that moves,
The quintessence of mobility,
It surrounds me!
I exhibit my mingle with you,
Musical rhythm that you flow within me,
Do not hold back ...
Back to stream like a river!
You know enhance the beginning of the real fury,
You could penetrate the plot of my heart,
With captivating tones,
I feel your sense of daring,
I hear a recital,
Then in an external rhythm ...
The words songs.
You stimulates within me,
A surreal tune,
Among a neural network,
And the passionate beat of my heart.

Comments

jwiener

Throughout the poem, you write about rhythm but you also use rhythmic words in the poem, which is a truly excellent skill to have as a writer. You reference water in the poem as well, and as I was reading it, I definitely felt the words flowing as if a constant waterfall. Amazing job!

Elizabet

Thank you for your comments.It really encoureges my talent.

Elizabet

Thank you for your comment.It really encourages my talent.

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