Music Saves Lives

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They told me to give up

Loud voices in my head

But I pick pens

Not having a dirt bed

 

Growing stronger each day

I won’t be a travesty 

These voices won’t win

Building my own dynasty

 

Sometimes it’s hard

But watch me reach May

And fight off the bulls

Attacking me every day

 

Now I know why

My heart beats like a drum

I’ll be a thrill, not a tragedy

My life is not done

 

The voices, they hurt

And it’s hard to fight

But I will not lose

This fight tonight 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

great poem

very reflective in terms of expressing yourself

keep writing

mforbach

Thank you so much :)

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