moving this way and that way

Thu, 08/16/2012 - 18:03 -- Cece22

common moving between another
beats like one
moving this way and that
i have a lot of strength left
i want you to
kiss you here kiss you there
moving hear moving everywhere
its just a simple activity
that humans do
moving this way and moving that way

Comments

jwiener

This poem really has a nice flow to it. As you write about "moving this way and that way" I felt like I was weaving my way through the words of the poem.

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