Motivation

Location

93060
United States
34° 21' 14.9976" N, 119° 3' 33.3756" W

There's a reason to live
It's our motivation
No matter what it is,
Look for your salvation

People always wait to meet their fate
But that's a mistake, you must CREATE

Your destiny lies in your very own hands
Life gets hard, but you've got to understand:
You must be patient, and look for motivation
Find something you love to do with dedication

Hard times will soften
Nothing lasts forever
Focus on the positive
Things always get better

Comments

marie

The balance of material in this poem (a short, punctuated first stanza, growing middle stanzas, and mirroring the first with another short ending stanza) works really well here. I'd really like to see other poems focusing on types of inspiration you might look to, to expand on this as if in a series. Really nice work!

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