In To The Mind

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Darkness surrounds.

Sudden burst of lights.

Flashing, 

Running,

and...

Carrying?

What do these stars carry with them?

Like cars on the freeway,

They travel head to toe.

Where don't they go?

Thats what I want to know.

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