This mess

Location

Life tracks on with a whip

And I survive on what's left behind

Angry I am convinced

I've been decived by what's on your mind

 

I fell free since you left

Patiently I have taught myself how to live

But I can't tell if this is life or death

I just want what's mine

Without another breath

 

Easy

Taking me out quiet completley

What's gone wrong behind these eyes

Please don't take the one thing that might save me

Just keep me alive

Deep inside this mess

 

As I push for my life

You might hate me

But I don't really mind

Because you are nothing but a link in life

That just fucked me one to many times

 

Easy Taking me out quiet completey

What's gone wrong behind these eyes

Please don't take the one thing that might kill me

You're just keeping me alive

Deep inside this mess

 

 
 
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