Loving Heart

Our true love began with dedication

Our mutual feelings we do impart

Your love leaves me with a bright sensation

To you I grant this gift: my loving heart


Compassion spreads its wings like a white swan

The wings of our love prepare to take flight

Your love shines forth as if it's breaking dawn 

You brighten my life with strong, soothing, light


Your beauty is like a gentle flower

Delicate, unique, sweet, special to me

A ring I propose, you are my vower

I softly kiss your hand, with eyes dreamy 


When thoughts wander, I always think of you

If only one's desires could come true

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