Lovesick

Sat, 08/30/2014 - 22:33 -- Takarya

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Sculpted by the likeness of love,

Beaten with cupids stick,

We all become lovesick,

Showered with great gifts,

Driven nice, luxurous places,

Meeting the family,

Leaving with no traces,

Carrying on with not one worry,

Staying out past midnight,

Anything could happen,

Still no fright,

Overtaken by the love,

Yes the clock still ticks,

But we all, we all become lovesick

 

 
 
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powerful.imani

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I'm Speechless and the ending we all become lovesticks i had my mouth open like yess preach .FANTASTIC WORK KEEP IT UP  

I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!

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